Audience profile & self analysis of first draft

Overall the feedback we got is that they enjoyed the film overall, and like how it focuses on skateboarding by using lots of skate clips, this proves how we have targeted our main audience. Other thing they picked up on is how unique the interview style is, using the rule of thirds and also the cinematic Bokha, they talked about how professional it was because of the multi use of camera angles keeping it interesting even in the interview.

The interviewee picks up on the fact that we displayed failure and also success, they enjoyed the fact that we did but they want to see the progression and process of landing a trick not just a bail. This can also help show determination and how dedicated Kamel is to the sport.

The major thing that they felt was missing is the push on the narrative 'inspiration'. We talked about how we could portay this idea and they felt like a whole new part of the story needed to be added visually. And this is where the idea of the desert came in.

One thing we agreed to change is the beginning, they didn't like how it started with a bail, if we wanted to keep this idea of showing failure and success we had to show progression.